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Blood tastes blue and water feels green
Kisses sound like sandpaper and a touch smells bitter
but baby, your heart looks black

Running through the woods, dogs at your heels,
Bet you don't laugh at ridding hood,
Still you zigzag, a frantic pace to get away
but baby, your heart looks black.
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Sparked by, "Never trust your feelings"

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:iconpyrothepoet:
i like it, i belive it reads at a fast pace, or maybe thats just me,

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:iconthescarletprince:
It is fast paced, then again I had wanted it to be a part of a song so its not just you :)

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... often when I write I am trying to make words do the work of line and colour. I have the painter’s sensitivity to light. Much (and perhaps the best) of my writing is verbal painting. ~Elizabeth Bowen~

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